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MY PRACTICE: Synthesising information from different sources

You can practise what you’ve learnt by working on these tasks. Some student syntheses are also provided.

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Remember, these are only suggestions; there are many ways to synthesise these texts.

You can talk to your instructor for other acceptable sytheses.

Example 1

Original text 1:

“Psychiatric and neurological disorders are afflictions of the brain that can affect individuals throughout their lifespans…Several brain imaging projects have attempted to identify suitable biomarkers in neuropsychiatric diseases” [p. 2].

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Original text  2:

“Critical to this paradigm is the biomarker, which is broadly defined as any biological signature that provides an objective indication of an individual’s disease status and that ideally predicts clinical outcomes” [p. 1].

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Original text 3:

“According to the official definition by the National Institutes of Health (NIH), ‘a biomarker is a characteristic that is objectively measured and evaluated as an indicator of normal biological processes, pathogenic processes, or pharmacological responses to a therapeutic intervention’ (Biomarkers Definitions Working Group et al., 2001)” [p. 2].

 

References

[1] S. Koike, S. C. Tanaka, T. Okada, T. Aso, A. Yamashita, O. Yamashita, M. Asano, N. Maikusa, K. Morita, N. Okada, M. Fukunaga, A. Uematsu, H. Togo, A. Miyazaki, K. Murata, Y. Urushibata, J. Autio J, T. Ose, J. Yoshimoto, T. Araki, M. F. Glasser, D. C. Van Essen, M. Maruyama, N. Sadato, M. Kawato, K. Kasai, Y. Okamoto, T. Hanakawa, T. Hayashi, “Brain/MINDS Beyond Human Brain MRI Group. Brain/MINDS beyond human brain MRI project: A protocol for multi-level harmonization across brain disorders throughout the lifespan”, NeuroImage: Clinical, vol. 30, 2021.

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[2] L. Parkes, T. D. Satterthwaite, and D. S. Bassett, “Towards precise resting-state fMRI biomarkers in psychiatry: synthesizing developments in transdiagnostic research, dimensional models of psychopathology, and normative neurodevelopment,” Current Opinion in Neurobiology, vol. 65, pp. 120–128, 2020.

 

[3] M. D. Filiou and C. W. Turck, “General overview: Biomarkers in neuroscience research”, International Review of Neurobiology, vol. 101, pp. 1–17, 2011.

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Instructor's comment:
This sentence is too long and with many commas, including a lot of info/ideas packed into one sentence.

 

Simply put:

[Medical scientists/researchers are investigating ways of identifying biomarkers for illnesses such as psychiatric and neurological disorders.]

 

A suggestion:

In order to find solutions for various illnesses in …, scientists have turned their attention to biomarkers, broadly defined as physiological substances which indicate presence of diseases and could, therefore, predict responses to medical intervention.

Student's synthesis:
In general, because psychiatric and neurological disorders are brain ailments that can pose as an obstacle in the patient’s life even throughout their whole life, researchers have set out different projects in order to find suitable, for those diseases, biomarkers, which can be described as a kind of biological characteristic that can identify a patient’s disease status and if possible predict clinical outcomes, for example pathogenic process or the organism’s response to any given [1].
 

Example 2

Original text 1:

“A common feature is the deflection of the propulsive vector from the vehicle centerline in order to produce a moment about the center of the mass of the vehicle. The deflection can be produced by turning the exhaust plume with jet tabs, by pintle nozzles or tilting the whole nozzle assembly” [p. 1].

 

​Original text 2:

“The widely used bead nozzle and ball and socket nozzle of solid rockets are mechanical, full-axis swing solid rocket motor nozzles. The bead nozzle supports the injection load by one or more rows of balls between the movable convex spherical surface and the immovable concave spherical surface; and the ball and socket nozzle cancels the balls in the bead nozzle, so that the convex spherical surface and the concave spherical surface direct contact. The relative motion between the convex and concave surfaces of the two nozzles achieves a full-axis swing of the nozzle” [p. 2].

 

Original text 3:

“Conversely to mechanical thrust vectors the fluidic thrust vector uses a fixed geometry. They use a secondary flow to control the main exhaust flow-stream, and in this way redirect the flow at or near the exit plane. In this regard a wide range of concepts have been proposed, such as shock vector control, sonic throat skewing, synthetic jet actuator and co-flow or counter flow nozzles, see Fig. 4” [p. 6].

 

​Original text 4:

“The phenomenon of a secondary flow injection into the supersonic nozzles is largely documented in the literature” [p. 2].

 

References

[1] V. D. Lazić, and M. R. Ristanović, “Electrohydraulic thrust vector control of twin rocket engines with position feedback via angular transducers”, Control Engineering Practice, vol. 15, no. 5, pp. 583-594, 2007.

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[2] C Shi, J. Yang, and Z. Xu, “Research on thrust vector control of nonlinear solid rocket motor nozzle based on active disturbance rejection technology”, In MATEC Web Conference, vol. 309, art. no. 04008, 2020.

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[3] J. Páscoa, A. Dumas, M. Trancossi, P. Stewart, and D. Vucinic, “A review of thrust-vectoring in support of a V/STOL non-moving mechanical propulsion system”, Open Engineering, vol. 3, no. 3, pp. 374-388, 2013.

 

[4] R. Chouicha, M. Sellam, S. Bergheul, “Effect of reacting gas on the fluidic thrust vectoring of an axisymmetric nozzle”, Propulsion and Power Research, 2020, n. pag.

Student's synthesis

Thrust vectoring mechanisms are mostly electromechanical or hydraulic, with actuators tilting the thrust outlet to create side thrust [1,2], while fluidic TVC methods using either the Coanda effect or a secondary flow injection have also been studied [1].

Instructor's comment:

The sentence structure is quite problematic.

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A suggestion:

While thrust vectoring mechanisms are mostly electromechanical or hydraulic, with actuators being tilted to create desired thrust [1,2], fluidic TVC methods use secondary flow injection to influence the propulsion systems [3,4].

Example 3

Original Text 1:

“Ocean energy is one of the most important forms of renewable energy. Wave energy has received considerable attention in the recent past. Since the cost of primary energy will almost certainly rise, alternative forms of energy conversion must obviously be investigated and developed. It has been estimated that about 10^16 W of solar energy reaches the earth. The ocean, which covers nearly 71% of the earth’s surface, acts as a natural collector of this energy” [p. 676].

 

Original text 2:

“Solar and wind energy are the first of this kind of solution, mostly used until today. Taking into account that 2/3 of the earth is covered by water, sea surfaces may be also used towards this scope. The last years, wave energy combined with wind is investigated by European countries and the US” (p.  399).

 

Original text 3:

“Wave power is clean, safe, permanent and uses relatively simple and well-known technology. We are particularly fortunate in our resources of wave energy.” (p. 724)

 

References

[1] M. Ravindran, and P. Koola, “Energy from Sea Waves—the Indian Wave Energy Programme”, Current Science, vol. 60, no. 12, pp. 676-680, 1991.

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[2] G. Emmanouil, G. Galanis, C. Kalogeri, G. Zodiatis, and G. Kallos, “10-year High Resolution Study of Wind, Sea Waves and Wave Energy Assessment in the Greek Offshore Areas”, Renewable Energy, vol. 90, no. 1, pp. 399-419, 2016.

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[3] S. Salter, S. “Wave Power”, Nature, vol. 249, no. 6, pp. 720-724, 1974.

Student's synthesis

Energy derived from wind and sun appears to be very popular but expensive as well.  The blue ocean is believed to be an alternative source of energy, considering that it covers the 2/3 of the earth’s surface. This remarkable power source is free and quite easily accessible and if combined with wind and solar energy sources it can provide a neat and reliable energy supply. Particularly, ocean waves provide energy which is environmentally friendly and without risks to human health while using non-complex equipment [1, 2, 3].

Instructor's comment:

The student tries to mention each and every detail of the original texts (which is unnecessary), adding sentences together without using, say, conjunctions/subordinators that help show relationships between ideas.

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The following sentence (from the student's syntehsis) would have been a nice synthesis (with some modifications).

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"This remarkable power source is free and quite easily accessible and if combined with wind and solar energy sources it can provide a neat and reliable energy supply".

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A suggestion:

Readily available renewable sources of energy, such as sun and wind, have been integrated into power grid systems quite successfully. Overlooked in the past, but gaining increasing attention from policy makers and researchers alike, wave energy – technological innovations in such field can be very comfortably combined with proven conventional technology - has the potential to transform the fundamental cost structures of other sources.

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Example 4

Original text 1:

“Space flight experience has led to a conclusion that microorganisms are just as ubiquitous in spacecraft as they are on Earth (Pierson, 2001). Contamination during spacecraft manufacturing and assembly has been a source of concerns not only for human health but also for planetary protection. So far, a broad diversity of bacteria, mainly Proteobacteria and Firmucutes, has been detected in clean rooms in which spacecraft are assembled (La Duc et al., 2004; La Duc et al., 2009; La Duc et al., 2014; Mahnert et al., 2015; Moissl-Eichinger et al., 2015; Moissl et al., 2008; Moissl et al., 2007; Mora et al., 2016a; Smith et al., 2017; Vaishampayan et al., 2013b; Venkateswaran et al., 2001). In a study aided by 16S ribosomal RNA (rRNA) microarray technology im plemented on PhyloChip devices, the number of bacterial taxa found increased 70-fold, as compared to traditional cloning methods (La Duc et al., 2009). PhyloChip microarray and sequencing methods have been also used to show that these contaminants can be divided into two different types: those that are associated with human commensals and/ or pathogens, and those that thrive in the harsh clean room environ ment (La Duc et al., 2009; La Duc et al., 2012; La Duc et al., 2014; Moissl-Eichinger et al., 2015; Monsieurs et al., 2014; Probst et al., 2010; Stepanov et al., 2014; Vaishampayan et al., 2013a; Vaishampayan et al., 2010; Venkateswaran et al., 2014b). The latter, mostly oligo trophs, extremophilic, and extremotolerant microorganisms, are of special concern, as they seem to have developed novel mechanisms to cope with extreme environments in spacecraft (Derecho et al., 2014; Gioia et al., 2007; McCoy et al., 2012; Mijnendonckx et al., 2013; Stepanov et al., 2016; Tirumalai et al., 2013; Vaishampayan et al., 2014). This, in turn, creates dangers of forward contamination of landing sites if conditions at these sites allow for supporting simple life forms (Baque et al., 2014; Benardini et al., 2014; La Duc et al., 2014; Mahnert et al., 2015; Moissl-Eichinger et al., 2016b; van Heereveld et al., 2016; Venkateswaran et al., 2014a). For these reasons, instruments to carry out PCR, gene expression or proteomics measurements should be considered as components of a standard package for any mission aimed at search for life as a way to identify and monitor potential terrestrial contaminants. Furthermore, bioengineering solutions are being sought to mark and destroy these organisms (Stapelmann et al., 2013; Venkateswaran et al., 2004)” [p. 908].

 

​Original text 2:

“Since we will be searching Mars for extraterrestrial life, this planet is of special concern regarding issues of planetary protection. Therefore, we need to protect Mars from contamination and thereby protect the integrity of future science missions to the planet. As discussed by Barengoltz (8) and others (30, 39), future sample acquisition flight missions to Mars pose a number of specific protection issues. There is concern for contamination of Earth by possible Mars organisms (19). Also, there is a need for robust anticontamination procedures for the forward protection of Mars and for the sake of future missions. We clearly need to ensure that terrestrial microbes from acquisition

missions do not contaminate samples analyzed in situ or after return to Earth" [p. 4164].

 

References

[1] F. Karouia, K. Peyvan, and A. Pohorille, “Toward biotechnology in space: High-throughput instruments for in situ biological research beyond Earth”, Biotechnology Advances, vol. 35, no. 7, pp. 905-932, 2017.

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[2] R. L. Crawford, “Microbial Diversity and Its Relationship to Planetary Protection”, Applied and Environmental Microbiology, vol. 71, no. 8, pp. 4163-4168, 2005.

Student's synthesis

Additionally, they would need to contemplate how this breakthrough could be utilized by humans, as the space law states several times that man must protect the celestial bodies. Therefore, the protection of Mars is one of the obligations we have, as it is necessary for the realization of future missions in this celestial body. Also, if the astronaut who has discovered the microorganisms decides to study them on Mars or back on Earth without having mentioned it to anyone else, she should be doubly careful. That happens because she needs to keep in mind that the microorganisms she is conducting a study on are most likely vulnerable to terrestrial ones and can become infected. However, she could have secured a more protective study against infections if she had not done it perfectly on her own and had mentioned it to the crew.

But apart from the protection of the alien planet, it is necessary to protect the earth as well. Its protection, however, has been neglected since the discovery of the Arian microorganism. Microbial forms are likely to be able to survive in spacecraft. As a consequence, it is almost certain to infect it and put the mission and the lives of the astronauts in danger, as well as their destination [1].

Instructor's comment:
Although this text is relatively long, overall, it is quite acceptable.​

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A suggestion:

Until recently, and because of lack of knowledge, Earth’s protection has been neglected. The discovery of the Arian microorganism, microbial forms able to survive in spacecraft and spaceflight, have made this point clearer. In other words, there is high probability of infecting celestial bodies as we explore space, and at the same time putting the mission and the lives of the astronauts in danger.

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